Use active verbs if you want powerful prose.

If your prose feels wooden, your description probably isn't active enough.

On the first day of Christmas, my true love sent to me, a writing tip in an email.🎄

In this short article:

  • Want engaging prose? You should use strong, active verbs to describe static objects.

What is the orange doing?

Imagine this:

There was an orange on my table. On top of the orange was a peanut.

Did your imagined scene look anything like the photograph below?

Figure 1: the setup, as described.

Probably not!

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