The secret? Copying Hemingway.
And how to use them to write better.
Or, why you should start your story later than you think.
Make this one tiny change to improve your prose.
Aim for a mix of physical traits and emotional circumstances.
... or hear, or smell, or touch.
Is your story suffering from premature conflict resolution?
Give your reader rich visual details. Don't summarize.
Also, we rip apart a terrible passage from my novel.
